I don't think I could love these enough! If printing cost wasn't an issue, I would jump on those business cards :)
Alexandra, it's great to see another submission from you, I hope you're enjoying the added benefits of being a pro member!
This is really great. I love the brush style lettering you've used for your logo, it feels rough-and-ready but considered and stylised too! These bold, organic letterforms would work great, large or small. I think you've really nailed this brief Alexandra, good work!
I think the additional pattern work is good, and perhaps the juxtaposition of the harsh, straight lines, in comparison to the fluid, rough brush strokes of the lettering is a good thing, however in my opinion, I want the two to compliment each other a little better. Perhaps you could experiment with more fluid lines in this pattern, so it doesn't feel so tightly formatted in comparison to the lettering?
I think the colour palette you've chosen is great; it's bold, vibrant and fun... just watch your padding on the business cards, the content could do with some space between that and the edge of the card.
So only a few minor points to consider here! I think this is a strong logo-mark that you should use throughout your portfolio, website and stationery!
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