Hey Liz! Fab to see your submission to our packaging design brief. I hope that you're enjoying your time here as a Briefbox Pro member.
The design is looking lovely and modern, with a well-considered typeface. Nice job Liz!
I think in order to push this design forward you could further explore the honey bee illustration. Perhaps you could look at how this could be replicated as a pretty pattern?
I think that you could also further explore using the honeycomb designs, perhaps this could be applied in a transparent design across the glass? I think the design is working well overall, though for your next revision, have a bit more of a play with it! With a real life client, it's always good to show them a design which follows the brief and then a curveball to really show off your creative ideas.
All in all Liz, I'm liking your designs. Just a few suggestions here, to push the designs forward. Can't wait to see the revised version! And remember, if you do choose to work on it, make sure that you upload it as a separate submission so we can review your lovely design work.
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