Hey Benny, great submission. I really like the layout and composition of this design. I also really like the typography treatment, although I'm not completely sure why you've created a wave effect, is this to represent the buzzing of the bee, or perhaps the type sinking into the liquid honey? Either way, I feel like perhaps the type would be much stronger without it. I really like the larger, swirly 'S', although watch your rounded edges, the curve looks slightly off on the right.
The crest and stacked layout works really well, and I like the simplified honey cone in the background. I feel like the '1985' should be centre aligned though as it looks a bit unbalanced at the moment.
Great work so far, looking forward to seeing more submissions!
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