Great to see your edits to this brief and hope our feedback is proving useful in progressing your skill set and portfolio as a Pro User!
Loving this submission! I'm glad to see that you've taken our feedback on board and kept the 'organic honey' text all in one line. I think that this has helped to make the logo feel much more succinct and 'whole.'
I think that the crest is also working well with the type change, though I think you could work on centralising the text with the crest as it feels a little too strongly to the left at the moment. Once this is complete, it would be awesome to see this logo tested out on a few mock ups to really get a feel for the brand.
Other than a few tweaks, nice job Chris! Keep going with it and I'm looking forwards to seeing the next steps here.
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