Love the backstory! Haha.
Awesome to see this submission from you. Liking this playful style here Artin!
I like that you've developed a number of different colour palettes here. I think that these items would be appealing to both adults and kids alike. Very nice job on this brief!
My personal favourite is the pink and purple design. I feel that this colour scheme works best for your design. I think that the type is also working really well, how you've integrated it with the chewing gum imagery! The colours are also nice and brief, which was exactly what we were looking for within this brief.
To develop these designs a bit more, I think you could add a subtle texture to the type and background of the sticker. This will help the designs 'pop' a bit more and stop them looking too flat on the page. I would also have a go at making the outlines to the design a little more subtle. If you also have initial sketches for this brief, make sure you also upload them! It would be fantastic to see your initial ideas for this project.
Other than those small tweaks, great job Artin. Really looking forward to seeing your next submission as a BB Pro!!
hello Gill, thank you very much for your feedback, i will have a go at reworking this design and resubmitting it along with some of the sketches.
i'm looking forward to finishing of a few more designs to submit. hopefully i will get some feedback on them also :)
that's really cool! sorry about the gum in your pants haha, but great idea!
lol thank you :) im glad you liked it. i had more fun making it than getting off me.
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