Hi Vinny, Great start on this brief. The colour palette used works really well and the overall structure of your layouts is coming along well. Here are a few points however that could help this design come along nicely.
1) The type usage over the orange horizontal banner - the placement and type selection work well but the thin almost opaque 'design' doesn't read too well. I would suggest a bolder solid white styling for this type area.
2) The VP monogram is a really good starting point of something that could work well, using two pencils for the V is very clever, my only suggestion would be that perhaps the width of the strokes here is way to thin and almost gets lost against the solid white fill of the P. Perhaps less lines in the pencils and then slightly thicker width usage.
3) The repeat pattern of the monogram used for the background could be slightly more opaque. It's quite strong for an area that would have type overlayed
All in all a great start and looking forward to seeing more of your work Vinny!
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