I think the design concept is really nice, I love what you've done with the scribble pin stripe pattern, and the soft gradient. I think if you connected the second s to the P in power instead of having the line separate. connect them so it looks like it flows. The same fore the flourish that is coming off the top P in pussy. Also I think the r in power would work better as a small uppercase letter or just remove the looping part because it is necessary. Oh an another idea, connect the two ss and then connect the y to the P in power.
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