Thanks so much for the feedback! Really appreciate it!
Hi Randi, great to see another submission from you here at Briefbox. First of all I really love the colour palette for this and think it could work really well after a few design tweaks are made. Taking a look at this artwork there are simple things that can be done to improve it's appearance.
First of all - padding. The way the main black type sits almost on the upper left section of the outer circle feels way too tight and cramped up against it. I would align your type path baseline further away from the outer black circle, perhaps adding some kerning to the letters too - this will make that whole section feel less heavy and busy.
Secondly, the landscape elements around the building almost feel a bit too simple and un completed. You could perhaps look at introducing a road, or steps underneath the building illustration to finish it off and make it appear like it is sat on something rather than floating over the crest.
Keep up the good work Randi and look forward to seeing more form you!
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