Very exciting to see your first submission to Briefbox as a Pro user! Looking forward to seeing further submissions from yourself here at the HQ.
I'm liking your use of simple line weight here. This ensures that the overall design really 'flows' together. Good work Zara. I think the pops of contrasting colours are also a nice touch.
I would suggest unifying the edges of the lines in your design work. In design, it's useful if you have curved edges to stick to curved, softened edges and pointed edges vice versa. This helps to make your overall illustration look resolved and more polished. For instance, you could just slightly soften the points on the Statue of Liberty's crown to make it fit in alongside the other elements on the page.
Other that this, I would suggest reviewing your choice of font, as it looks slightly dated on the page, and in italics, looks a little strange with the styling of your illustration. Have a quick research of fonts and styles that you are particularly drawn to on the page. Have a play with the design and see what you think!
All in all, Zara this is a great first submission! If you do choose to work on this make sure that you upload it as a separate submission so we can review your awesome design work. Keep up the good work!
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