Well done for taking the leap and posting your first submission!
It's always interesting to see people's interpretations of their favourite films. You've made a great start here although I do find that it feels a little chaotic! I haven't seen the film so the feeling it evokes might be perfectly accurate...!
This could be a 'less is more' situation and you could try paring back some of the strokes to focus on the shape of the wave. I'd suggest either changing the colour of the text to blend in a little more with the wave or keep the S within the text only to keep it neat. Try adding some background to the wave or maybe some credits below the text (in the typical movie poster way) to help ground everything.
Look forward to seeing what's next from you!
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