Hey Chris, thanks for your submission to our cottage / deli menu.
The illustrative detail is nice and I like the italic fonts. I think that the brown background, however, isn't working well on the page. I think that the black background is a little better, though I think you could have a few tests of other backgrounds and textures such as a rustic wood and see how this feels.
I would also suggest testing out a larger illustrative detail on the front. It's quite pale and potentially feels a little lost on the page? I think the colour palette could also be adjusted to. Try adjusting the font size, as the menu smaller subheadings look slightly too small for me. I think that you should have a play with this design using my suggests above and see what you think!
All in all, if you have a work with my suggestions above I think this could be a great resolved piece for your portfolio. Keep going with it Chris and can't wait to see your revisions!
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