Thanks so much for submitting your design to our project app for creatives. This is looking really swish, nice work!
I'm loving the original illustrations, loose marks on the page and colour palette. I think in order to really push these designs forwards I think it would be worth making a few adjustments:
On your main screen image (on the computer) it would be worth making sure the design goes to the very edges of the screen. The purple looks a little odd at the moment and distracts from your lovely design!
I think also it'd be worth taking a look at a simpler font and design in the centre of the design. The illustrations surrounding the design are really strong, though the complicated, finer lines in the centre distract the eye. I would suggest using a clean, modern font against your pale yellow background.
In design, it's always useful to fully explore the use of white space and use it on the page. The eye needs time to rest and take in the beautiful design, that it's currently looking at! You've got to make space to allow this to happen.
Other than this, I would slim down your contact fields, they don't have to be so prominent on the page. Experiment by adding them to the left, bottom centre or right of the page and see how this looks.
All in all this is a really creative submission and I'm looking forward to seeing your revisions! And remember, if you do choose to work on this design, make sure that you upload it as a separate submission so we can review your awesome designs!
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