Thank you for the feedback, noted :)
RICK JONES!!!! This is dope!
Great to see another submission from you buddy and thanks for uploading your development sketches, they're great to see and I'm sure the community will agree! Few (minor) pointers...
Love the letterforms in general and the consistency in weight, angle and styling is nearly spot on. The only slight issue I have is with there 'k', it looks a little too wide in comparison to the rest of the letterforms. Perhaps it's because it has both ascending and descending elements as well as it being slight wider then the rest of the letters, so it throws the weight off slightly. The first letters of each word being larger works well though.
I really like the overlapping 'R' and the flourishes throughout, just watch the fluidity of the top right loop, it looks a little jagged in comparison to the rest of the flourishes. You could smooth this out by using only horizontal and vertical bezier curves in Illustrator.
Other then that mate, great work again! Keep 'em coming, it's a pleasure to have you onboard!
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