Thanks for uploading your submission to our cookbook cover design. Great to see another submission from yourself here at Briefbox!
I'm really enjoying the use of bright contrasting colours and your composition, using the smaller illustrative elements to form a larger design. Nice work Emma.
However, in order to really push this design forwards, I would suggest a few tweaks. I think that you could lower the thickness of your black lines in the illustrative elements. I think it's looking just a little clunky on the page, and could be much improved by reducing your line weight here. You also could test a version which doesn't include any black lines at all and see how you feel about the overall design. For instance, your work looks awesome without the use of black lines, in your submission 'Touchstone app' to our Project App brief.
Other than this, I would explore the layout of your title as I feel it needs a little more padding, space surrounding the letters. Often compositions in design look much improved when you allow it to 'breathe' a little more on the page. I would also consider your use of fonts as I feel that this is just a little blocky on the page.
Overall, this is a great start to this brief Emma! Keep going with it! If you do also have any initial sketches, this would also be great for our design community to see your initial thought process here. Looking forward to seeing your next submission!
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